Performance Critique: May 10b

After 2am at a music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/NUH6fqnf_TI

2m16s Hand moving out from the body instead of across the body looks more natural

2m44s Resay “a DAP is the guy…” at the start of the sentence

3m57s Might be funnier to say “beheaded” instead of “put to death”

4m39s Cut the chance line

7m04s Not sure about the bed bugs line

11m58s Eyes should be darting around more

Overall: Working out mostly newer stuff. Up and down response as expected.

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