Performance Critique: May 10a

An 8pm variety show

httpv://youtu.be/F40DhG1Kx4g

0m20s Good job playing off the unique situation

2m05s The “death to call” line can be rewritten stronger

4m42s The “for marriage” line needs to be stronger

Overall: Very strong and consistent set. A couple lines need tightening but this is how my sets should go 90% of the time. Changing the opening joke may have helped things too.

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