The 9pm show
httpv://youtu.be/0cscmfO5Sns
0m34s Pause for an extra quarter second before “bake”
1m32s Weird that “maybe” didn’t get a response
3m38s Be ready for delayed laughs on that
4m38s Hit these lines harder, don’t go up at all at the end
5m58s Might need to find something funnier than “dad’s nursing home”
7m17s Slower on “then”
7m19s It should be “the birthday song” not “the song”
7m50s The “hope is lost” was off key
9m15s Good job ending on a big laugh
Overall: Decent set but not a single bit had EVERY line hit.