Performance Critique: March 23d

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vfwGCIeIEQ0

2m29s I can probably add “well you’d probably agree with this” to go back into my material

4m41s The if condition before “I’ll remember you” needs to make more sense

5m10s Change “apartment” back to “basement”

6m00s This could have cleaner wording

6m28s Say the follow home line in my normal voice

9m34s Brought them back after a lull

Overall: I started strong, had a weak 3 or 4 minutes in the middle, got them back, then lost them again in the last 40 seconds.

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