A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vfwGCIeIEQ0
2m29s I can probably add “well you’d probably agree with this” to go back into my material
4m41s The if condition before “I’ll remember you” needs to make more sense
5m10s Change “apartment” back to “basement”
6m00s This could have cleaner wording
6m28s Say the follow home line in my normal voice
9m34s Brought them back after a lull
Overall: I started strong, had a weak 3 or 4 minutes in the middle, got them back, then lost them again in the last 40 seconds.