Doing a bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2R-JFBFBvgE
2m39s The thesaurus joke needs a few more lines
2m49s Great response to that line
5m17s Coordinate the arms and hips better, it should be a little more mechanical
6m14s Reverse the line, it should start with friends buying dvds and end with businessman
Overall: A little up and down, but the new mom thing worked well.