Performance Critique: March 23c

Doing a bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2R-JFBFBvgE

2m39s The thesaurus joke needs a few more lines

2m49s Great response to that line

5m17s Coordinate the arms and hips better, it should be a little more mechanical

6m14s Reverse the line, it should start with friends buying dvds and end with businessman

Overall: A little up and down, but the new mom thing worked well.

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