The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/9X1HfsF9ZT0
0m23s Try giving a “what the hell” look
1m10s Palm in a weird position, make it seem less robotic
3m43s Say “you’re” at the start of the sentence to be clearer
3m54s Say “it’d be like”
4m17s Emphasize “lifetime” harder
4m22s No need for the “yeah” here
4m38s Might be able to cut the horny line, it’s not working that well
5m44s Good crowd work
5m52s Sell the eye roll even harder
6m03s Smile a little more on this
6m52s Not the right place for this one liner
7m06s The “I’m tough enough” was improvised but might be a decent idea
7m24s Move eyes around more
8m04s Sell the “oh that’s so cool” better
9m12s Shouldn’t have done this bit here, always close with it
10m04s Try having the eyes open a little more
10m52s Should’ve done it with the accent
Overall: I got consistent laughs but it wasn’t as strong or as smooth as it should be.
