Performance Critique: March 16a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=owvitzu469Y

1m20s This is the new two lines of the joke, they’re decent

1m37s Say “hell” instead of “fuck”

2m25s Make it “unsolved mysteries”

3m27s Say “shrink” instead of “psychologist”

4m05s The mom should just be “back to school”

5m44s First line should be “you not scary”

Overall: Working out mostly new stuff, it needs work

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