Performance Critique: March 15

Going up at like 1am at a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FyAA6fykmRY

4m38s Finish the joke, or cut the line

5m21s If I can figure out a way to make the last 20 seconds funny, it’ll be really good and unique

6m43s He said “he treats the light like a 3 year old boy” and it took me way too long to get it

8m20s That’s a funny improvised line, might wanna keep it for other shows

10m27s Don’t bumble the line

10m44s More commitment on “that’s the American way!”

11m12s Weird buzzer motion, smooth that out

Overall: Decent for 1am and I might’ve improvised a line or two that are keepers.

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