Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K52K50bA_0w
3m08s Say “I hate flying first class” in my normal voice, or even better, cut this joke
5m42s Reword and tighten her criticisms
Overall: The new mom joke has potential but needs work.
Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K52K50bA_0w
3m08s Say “I hate flying first class” in my normal voice, or even better, cut this joke
5m42s Reword and tighten her criticisms
Overall: The new mom joke has potential but needs work.
