A bar show in the Miami, FL area
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qGv0LJofWjc
0m27s The sound felt as weird on stage as it sounds on the video
0m44s That was meaner than necessary, but they were being disruptive all set
0m58s If I interrupt myself on a joke, I should move onto another joke, even if it’s my first joke
2m48s Pause after “hitman”
4m18s Try changing this to “the power of hair product”
5m36s No reason to spend twenty seconds getting the guy’s name, I could’ve done my one liner without knowing his name as he was already getting applause
6m04s I need an actual punch line, not “thanks mom”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17nGI_zsLKQ
Overall: I’m still learning how to win over the attention of people who aren’t necessarily at a venue for a comedy show. I definitely wasn’t as conversational as I could’ve been and I probably could’ve done more crowd work just to increase the odds that more people would listen.
