Performance Critique: June 9a

Going first at an open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SikuwHTyJ_Q

0m35s Say “fresh breath” not “clean breath”

2m38s Interesting that the act out got more laughs the longer I did it, maybe I should skip to the later half of it

4m45s Word the car line better

Overall: Good for a mic. Keep working on the drunk act out.

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