A late night prom show for high school kids
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_F3rK6Jx_E0
0m08s Don’t start with calling out the shitty clap, unless there’s a better punch line
2m21s I could’ve been more conversational here, and asked if anyone was going to college cause they don’t wanna get their ass kicked
3m06s No need to say that, if I’m gonna go that way, I should say “I guess I can’t buy coke here”
4m43s I went into this a bit too much, no need for all this
5m13s Change “sometimes” to “I used to”
6m43s Not sure why this big punch line completely missed
7m24s Say “partners” not “hookups”
8m47s Me telling high school kids the website for escorts is funny, even if they didn’t laugh
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXGQDf0G66c
0m24s Don’t say that part
Overall: I got some laughs but I never got good laughter momentum and I called the crowd out too much on being in high school and possibly not having had some experiences (once would be too much, I did it two or three times)
