Performance Critique: June 9b

An outdoor fundraiser show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czp3RiZqepo

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czp3RiZqepo

0m10s The comic before me stripped down to his underwear

0m22s That background sound is the rain, the people were under a tent

3m11s Good job holding for the laugh

4m46s Get rid of “opinion on anal” and just do the “spit or swallow”

5m18s Instead of “twenty bucks” say “a twenty”

5m23s Good job referencing the fund raiser

8m40s Don’t say Jewel two sentences in a row

9m21s It might be better worded “now we’re on a first class flight”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EPfOQbm_R0I

2m24s Didn’t need this last tag cause the joke went over well

2m52s Good quick reply

3m24s Awkward bail out of a joke, but at least I didn’t linger on it

Overall: Really solid set, I worked in a couple of lines about the specific fund raiser into my regular jokes, most all the jokes hit really strong and the ones that didn’t hit strong, I was able to keep going and get everyone back on track

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