Performance Critique: June 8

Hosting my show in Astoria

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5VyExyThfU

0m36s Decent off the cuff joke

1m25s Pause a half second longer before “not all the white ones…”

5m24s Try “hair lip” instead of “eye patch”

6m04s Instead of “her” say “my mom”

6m51s Instead of the cough, just point to whoever laughs loudest and go “I think we found our cokeheads”

8m12s Get rid of “wine” and the eucharist

8m45s When the music gets this loud, I should just start karaokeing

9m20s Pause for another second before saying “So I’m in the market…”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pgTgN5hAtzk

1m16s Should’ve started doing this crowd work earlier in the set

Overall: Decent but I should’ve done a little more crowd work, especially towards the beginning, I should try to pace it like: joke, crowd, joke joke, crowd, joke joke joke, crowd

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