Performance Critique: June 2b

At an outdoor comedy show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LmOP8o5XRpE

1m40s Turn my head to a different person for “in the first hour”

3m49s That tag has been working really well lately

5m07s I stepped on a laugh at “no one would take credit for that”

5m31s Say “nobody believes me” twice

7m43s Cut the contract line

8m14s Instead of “go a little slower” say “take the turn a little slower”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTh7XeGOveA

Overall: Pretty solid, I was able to get the chatty girl to be quiet and listen pretty quickly. Some jokes were stronger than others but there were laughs throughout.

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