Performance Critique: June 29

Another day, another show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=78Jt_rJvqJ4

0m35s Say “tennis” in a more flat tone

1m58s The premise could be tightened

2m04s Get rid of “Ringlish” line

3m18s No need to say “fail math” twice

4m16s Change body positions when doing a different character, to make it more obvious

5m44s Unfortunately they didn’t jump me as cougars after the show

Overall: I worked out a lot of newer jokes and parts of each one got laughs, so I just need to rework and tighten them

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