Performance Critique: June 27a

The Sunday Writers Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WA2kgxM6PsM

0m28s My lines are choppy, memorize things a little better or just go with inexact flow

2m12s Get rid of “for son”

2m49s Clean up the sentence to have less words in it

Overall: Working out some newer jokes.

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