Performance Critique: June 27

Two Saturday nights in a row where I only did one show, it’s nice to get paid occasionally 🙂

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9CjWzvIFTxk

0m56s Someone in the audience said “it’s true” so I repeated it and got a bigger laugh than usual

2m06s The eyes moving around confused are what get the big laughs on this punch line

2m27s Instead of “get out of it” it should be “how you break up online”

3m07s If I waited another second, the rest of the audience would’ve gotten it

4m35s Great instantaneous reaction

6m10s I shouldn’t repeat that line

6m27s Nice response by the audience member

6m47s Get rid of the “first of all” and “second of all” part

7m36s Say “I don’t mean to give the game away” more slyly

7m48s I should’ve said “who’d you cuddle, my mom?”

Overall: Pretty good set, but I need to tighten the “toy boy” part of the joke

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