Performance Critique: June 22

Hosting my show in Queens
3m12s Everyone turned their head so I had to call it out
4m16s Don’t say “If I wasn’t hosting I would…”
4m45s So creepy it’s funny
5m28s Get rid of the word “really” in there
5m43s Don’t say “terrible” in two examples in a row
7m29s Too wordy of a punch line
8m14s Throw in a “clap it up for young love” or something
Part 2
0m18s Working too hard for an answer that’s not even needed for the joke
2m56s Put the word “lie” last
3m22s Pick three of the four
Overall: Mediocre hosting. I could’ve done more crowd work and been higher energy.

Hosting my show in Queens

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GhI0PWqYLUU

3m12s Everyone turned their head so I had to call it out

4m16s Don’t say “If I wasn’t hosting I would…”

4m45s So creepy it’s funny

5m28s Get rid of the word “really” in there

5m43s Don’t say “terrible” in two examples in a row

7m29s Too wordy of a punch line

8m14s Throw in a “clap it up for young love” or something

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdy2rk2HIRw

0m18s Working too hard for an answer that’s not even needed for the joke

2m56s Put the word “lie” last

3m22s Pick three of the four

Overall: Mediocre hosting. I could’ve done more crowd work and been higher energy.

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