Sunday writer’s mic
0m20s Awkward pauses are funny
0m40s Instead of “do a joke about this” say “talk about this on stage”
0m58s Say “send guys to Ben’s new camp”, I missed “guys” in that setup
1m34s Don’t do the baby spleen crack analogy, HD TV is stronger
2m35s I need to start this joke with almost getting run over by a jogger
2m53s Make it more of a rock song than a rap song
Overall: Worked out some newer jokes, some have potential but they need more work
Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WHhSH75ERAM
0m20s Awkward pauses are funny
0m40s Instead of “do a joke about this” say “talk about this on stage”
0m58s Say “send guys to Ben’s new camp”, I missed “guys” in that setup
1m34s Don’t do the baby spleen crack analogy, HD TV is stronger
2m35s I need to start this joke with almost getting run over by a jogger
2m53s Make it more of a rock song than a rap song
Overall: Worked out some newer jokes, some have potential but they need more work
