Saturday 8pm show
2m42s Get rid of “the wine”
2m46s Don’t make “would you let Jesus shave you?” into a question, make it into a statement
3m41s Just say “I’ll wave my hand till you laugh”
4m10s I can stop after “weight of failed expectations” no need for “for son”
4m39s Not a strong enough of a punch
6m20s Need a better punch than “straight jacket”
Part 2
Overall: Good ten minute set, especially since I’m still figuring out a bunch of these jokes.
Saturday 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gTkaiiPRYAA
2m42s Get rid of “the wine”
2m46s Don’t make “would you let Jesus shave you?” into a question, make it into a statement
3m41s Just say “I’ll wave my hand till you laugh”
4m10s I can stop after “weight of failed expectations” no need for “for son”
4m39s Not a strong enough of a punch
6m20s Need a better punch than “straight jacket”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7j7FMkcdSk
Overall: Good ten minute set, especially since I’m still figuring out a bunch of these jokes.
