This was advertised as a show but turned out to be a booked open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7K4gEktNazI
0m13s Since I figured out this was an open mic I decided to do one old joke and then go into the material I wanted to workout
1m01s I need to sound more angry about “well my mom didn’t pretend”
1m25s Not enough distinct pauses after each English word
2m16s That failed in a miserably comical manner
2m47s I need to change physical positions when doing a different character
4m03s And I’ve completely lost the crowd (of comics)
Overall: My new jokes are way too long and don’t have enough punch lines. They need rewrites. Also the rock, paper, coat hangar joke may need to be dropped.
