Performance Critique: June 15a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xpLNWBcx_Cg

1m56s The wording isn’t even close to right

2m27s Go with a more unexpected line than nurse outfit

3m19s Rephrase start to “If you want to make an omelet…”

4m29s Keep looking for the right punch line

Overall: Weak mic response.

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