Performance Critique: June 14

This is the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_6MMlw5F1WI

0m27s Rewinding time is fun

1m25s The “cancel relationship” line should be later on

1m48s I shouldn’t call out applause breaks

2m12s Audience member outwitted me, if I was quick I would’ve offered to do it 3 times and have her owe me 3.5 inches

2m53s VCR manual always gets a laugh with comics but never with a real audience

3m57s The first “help me” should be more distraught

4m24s Kill the material between here and 4m42s

Overall: I tried out some newer material and it mostly worked. The Rock, Paper, Coat hanger might only work with meaner audiences, and the bits about my Russian background need to be tightened.

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