Performance Critique: June 11b

A Friday Night Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ie376QaSFUg

1m45s I might wanna try the line without the pause

5m05s Get rid of “anal” and don’t say “wine” before “spit or swallow”

5m43s Fully turning my head and going right into it makes this line funnier

7m18s Say “Jewel” instead of “she”

7m53s Need a stronger punch than “straight jacket”

Overall: Great set with steady laughs throughout, but the Jewel joke could be made funnier

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