Performance Critique: July 31

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=32HnAEkUbnI

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=32HnAEkUbnI
Aug 1a
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTtSCgyfFTw
Aug 1b1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DPA-12h_40
Aug 1b2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_hrENo2to8
Aug 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ru-EfM9Zsc

0m44s Change the hair dryer and gun line

3m36s Be more expressive on “let Jesus shave you”

4m34s I can end the act out on “I love that Donkey”

5m30s I might be able to get rid of the line “and then Jewel screwed me over”

6m21s Combine this into one line, “Zeus Inc booked me here tonight”

7m55s Good job dealing with the phone going off

Overall: Decent but not great.

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