Performance Critique: July 30a

A warm up mic before a real show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtYem8-4EYU

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NtYem8-4EYU

1m56s Say this before the “I actually love my dad” line

2m53s Make the sound effects and make the concept clearer

4m42s Change heroin to something more believable

Overall: Tighten the jokes.

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