Performance Critique: July 2a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3FJUio7_g54

1m36s My mom’s movements should have a purpose

1m49s I don’t need the tag of “or is legally allowed to”

3m01s Say the sentence smoothly without the “what do I say next” pause in the middle

5m19s Change this line

Overall: Ten minutes is ten minutes

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