Another mic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B987Y_jHzME
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B987Y_jHzME
0m43s Change “rough” to “tough”
1m34s Cut the genre part
3m04s Sell the “I’m gonna fast forward this” more
3m59s Get rid of the “I know that intellectually” part
4m26s Cut the Kant joke
5m23s This joke needs a stronger end
Overall: Decent. These jokes could use some trimming though.
