Performance Critique: July 28a

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XJSsXWt7e_w

0m52s Have a more specific posture for the friend

1m32s Say the sentence without pausing in the middle

2m15s Say “steady” before “sex supply”

3m22s Try “lone” instead of “only”

3m40s Make this punchier

5m33s Try saying the last one in my mom’s accent

Overall: Weak to mediocre mic response. Working out new jokes.

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