Performance Critique: July 27

Hosting my Queens show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtOj5dGOEY8

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtOj5dGOEY8

1m42s Hold up the gun more convincingly

3m39s Repeat the whole job title first, then translate it to bullshit artist

9m24s It should be “banged” then “nailed” not the same word twice

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6QykMmYj_4

0m34s Doing time between comics

2m50s After saying “fast forward that” once, make the sound effect

3m07s Change “it’s acting” to “she’s acting”

3m54s Cut the whole “fire cool… I know that intellectually”

Overall: Decent job MCing up front. I could’ve done more crowd work and tried to play off the crowd a little more. The “kinda cool kinda nerd” joke at the end did really well.

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