Performance Critique: July 26

Doing a 9:30 show, with more audience than usual

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cf6XOTPF-8w

0m48s Go bigger with the pointing motion

1m21s Go bigger with the pointing motion

1m34s Don’t use the words “today at work”

2m37s Draw out “I’m kidding” a little longer/softer

4m22s Come across my body on the pointing

6m08s This is a new twist to an old joke, gotta find the best wording for it

6m48s Add “cause you’re all uptight”

7m08s Put more emphasis on “AND”

7m53s Don’t stop on the laughs

8m33s Nice end on the joke

Overall: Great set. I messed around with the audience and would lose them a little but then bring them right back stronger. And I also got 3 or 4 big laughs from a two day old bit, so there’s lots of potential there.

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