Performance Critique: July 23a

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LifZYJRbA0Q

3m30s React a little more to their slight “aww”

4m28s Turn to the side for “no, not a women’s prison” so it feels more like an aside

5m35s Say “why Blade is in prison” instead of “he”

6m04s Could’ve tagged it with “I hope you’re not here with your “girlfriend””

6m42s Shift delivery on the second half of the sentence, that might get an extra laugh

Overall: Solid set.

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