Performance Critique: July 22a

Doing a spot on the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bFTkpedNik0

0m38s Enough laughed that I can say “I also laughed” instead of the negative version

1m26s Make sure to pick out a couple when doing this part, or else it’ll get slightly awkward like this

1m52s Don’t go for that line after a slightly weird mis-end of a joke

2m55s Good bring back after the previous two lines missed

3m05s Should’ve gone to the mom bit, not this bit

3m41s Smile a little more on their reaction

3m58s Hold the hand motion for longer

5m17s Seriously, learn to make sentences

6m38s Sound a little a sadder on “another casualty of lost luggage”

9m54s Good call back to a previous improvised line to end the set

Overall: Very up and down. Some jokes/lines hit great, others missed pretty badly, but I kept moving, never fully lost the crowd, and ended on a strong laugh.

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