Performance Critique: July 20

MCing my Queens show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rTeQJSQZ14Q

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rTeQJSQZ14Q

1m39s This needs a stronger end

2m49s I should’ve gone into a joke about the Army or had everyone clap it up for him

4m22s And this is why I haven’t done this joke in six months

6m04s Go back into crowd work because jokes weren’t hitting

7m34s I could be higher energy as the host, but I’m being nice and positive at least

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E285S4Zjtk0

0m03s I should’ve worked this in six minutes earlier

2m17s This line either gets an applause break or nothing, I hate it

4m05s Doing time between comics

4m57s Say “relationship play”

6m15s We had an audience member randomly yell stuff throughout the show but it wasn’t heckling

6m58s Cut the pink umbrella line

7m27s That’s so random it’s awesome

7m44s Good improvised line

8m07s Good job bailing on the joke and bringing up the next comic on a laugh

Part 3

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E9jgF8YJ5-M

1m46s Change this joke’s ending

Overall: I did a good job of staying positive when the show started out slow and got some decent laughs when I did time between comics.

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