Performance Critique: July 18a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYmGKZc5Htg

0m35s Try to keep my hands above my elbows for the whole set instead of dropping them to my sides at almost every punch line

2m33s No need for that many F-bombs in that short of a time, pick one place

4m05s Reword to “I hate the suburbs because”

5m03s At least it’s a good save line

5m11s Don’t pause there

5m45s More emphasis on the word “every”

Overall: Weak response even for a mic, working on newer stuff

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