Performance Critique: July 17

The Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgCvRv_q-ts

0m39s Sound happier about this

0m54s Make mouth talk motions with my hands

1m35s Cut “in front of everything else”

2m02s Cut “On your way out”

3m38s Think about a different delivery for this joke, maybe happier

4m11s Don’t pause here, pause after “watching them take their birth control”

Overall: Weak response even for a mic, working on mostly newer stuff

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