Performance Critique: July 17a

The 8:30

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50zLzm2rsIQ

0m58s Don’t everyone laugh so loud, my ear drums are gonna pop

1m42s I’m doing a good job taking my time and pausing after punch lines, even if it’s not getting the laughs I’m used to

2m18s Pause and nod after “it’s called, cancel relationship”

2m38s If I hear myself do the thesaurus joke one more time, I’m gonna hit myself on the head with a thesaurus, it’s not working, I need to get over it

3m40s I should say “she” and “he” instead of “you” and “you”

4m41s I like how that got the best laugh of the set

Overall: Another tough set and more evidence that it’s harder to make 8 people laugh in a 60 person room than it is to make 60 people laugh in an 8 person room. The positive thing to take away from this set is that I didn’t start talking faster and rushing through punch lines when I wasn’t get laughs.

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