Performance Critique: July 15c

A late night music and comedy mic

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9E07B4mYXXc

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9E07B4mYXXc

0m47s Nice

1m01s When it’s hectic, not doing jokes right away got people to listen after a minute

2m27s Get the word “If” in both sentences “I would’ve assumed it, IF you hadn’t said it… and IF it hadn’t been for the great coat hangar attack…”

4m10s Get rid of “He stole whole movie”

6m48s Not enough laughs in this joke

7m28s I hate the Jewel joke because the end gets the most consistent applause break but it slows my set to a crawl before that

8m44s That was a good improvised call back

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAbwRv42KYo

0m19s I could’ve responded to her with “then you know how this’ll work, you’ll be like, I wanna spend the rest of my life with you…”

Overall: I did a good job in the beginning in getting everyone to quiet down and pay attention and the set went well

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