Performance Critique: July 15b

A show in Harlem

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_7b8IEpIoc

0m12s The host was doing that before, so I wanted to try it, and it worked

0m15s I could’ve done it a few more times

1m59s The mom character is moving too much without purpose

3m40s Say “your” before “failed expectations”

3m59s Get rid of “he stole whole movie”

4m23s This joke works best when someone calls out for me to do it after I purposefully bail

5m54s I lost them on this joke, it’s more than a minute of barely any laughs

6m28s And it was a weak payoff

6m34s When a joke misses completely, address it before just going into another joke

7m24s Say “partners” not “hookups”

9m30s Hit this line more angrily

Overall: Good first five minutes then I lost them at the Jewel joke and never fully got them back

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