Performance Critique: July 12

This is me hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oIiKTmKG8I

0m34s It should be “she’ll think you’re a big spender” not “she’ll know you’re a big spender”

1m22s Instead of “real short and simple” I should say “or simplify it:”

2m18s I like the thesaurus joke although it barely ever works, it needs to go though

3m20s Get rid of the “whoever laughs does coke” line

3m45s The Mongolia joke isn’t a keeper

Overall: I worked out newer jokes and need to fix up the wording for the morning after pill and Russian family jokes. The Mongolia line and thesaurus line should go the way of the dodo.

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