Performance Critique: July 11

A Saturday Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZRlpIl8VSIg

1m27s I cut off her answer way too quick

1m46s The “grandma’s are good” response threw me a little bit because that’s not usually where there’s audience interaction

2m32s My arm should have a more definite and purposeful motion

3m33s Good call out on the audience

4m10s The girls gone wild membership is better than Netflix line I’ve been using, but it’s still not killer

5m50s Great question for which there’s no right answer, “Do both of you molest kids or just the guy in the beard?”

6m27s I could add on to the end of “You’re like “shit! That’s how much it is?”” with “I need adjust my budget for tonight!”

6m57s Too much “umming”

7m21s Try “RU-486” instead of “Plan B”

7m32s Instead of saying “oh, really?” I should’ve say “you’re right, that was too far”

8m07s It shouldn’t be “buy in bulk” but “buy plan B in bulk”

8m12s No need to say “you don’t like me right now” because they were still laughing and listening attentively

9m38s The next time an audience member replies “no” to having had to hold someone all night long, I should try to combine “clearly you’re a better man than me” with “this guy is like, not me, I’m a pimp, son” as they get laughs individually

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qra3HBPoEbo

0m08s Good finish to a mediocre set

Overall: While I got steady laughs, the set didn’t have the “exploding laughter” that the previous night’s set had. The crowd got a little uncomfortable with the morning after pill joke and I didn’t acknowledge that fact like I did the previous night.

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