A Friday night show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=og-aPvgWJH0
2m09s Great first two minutes
2m11s No need for “Jenny likes this”
2m21s The Netflix bit needs to go too
2m38s Calling out that it was getting uncomfortable made the audience more accepting of the subject
2m57s Good crowd work banter
3m08s It should be “she’ll think you’re a big spender” instead of “you’ll be like a big spender”
3m15s Pause for two seconds after “cause I’m the prize”
3m23s No need for “like crack”
4m03s Perfect timing on that one liner
4m15s Get rid of the thesaurus joke
4m26s Too much explanation before the act out
4m36s Take longer to finish “pleaaasssse”
5m14s Seem more scared for “help me, please help me”
5m51s I’m glad this punch line got a laugh, cause it’s one of my favorite new jokes
7m50s Decent follow up / save on a line that didn’t get a huge laugh
8m50s I can’t wait for the day where I have so many fans that “overestimating my fan base” doesn’t get any laughs
Overall: This was a really good set. My old stuff started real well and my new jokes mostly worked. Once I get rid of the new lines that didn’t work, I’ll have two or three minutes of new material.
