Performance Critique: July 09

Another NYC show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IR7qiKcxAa0

0m34s It’d be funny if she felt bad that the blind people got tricked

1m29s Never good to have an “uhhh” in the middle of a punch line

2m15s That is real Russian

2m28s First time the thesaurus joke got any laughs

3m03s Introduce mom’s accent in the setup

3m53s No need to interrupt the flow of my jokes to do these past twenty seconds of crowd work

5m07s The “toy boy” joke doesn’t need the “and he’s forty five” part

6m24s Good observation of what the audience was doing

Overall: As a set this wasn’t great but the new stuff about Russia is getting laughs, so that’s encouraging. I also should be careful about when I interrupt the flow of jokes to talk to the audience, it’s best to do it after a topic is over, not in the middle of it.

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