Performance Critique: July 07

A longer than usual set:

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eb1k0uOdYY0

1m27s Interesting that my third “tubes” line didn’t get any laughs but then my improv-ed line got a laugh, and the “looking at her” got a big laugh

3m21s I love “cause I can take you both”

3m37s And I managed to kill momentum

4m32s At least I got the crowd back

4m41s A good reason to review videos faster than a month later: To know when to kill a punch line quicker

5m57s And I lost the crowd again

6m52s The line is in the wrong order “next time at the bar” should come before “instead of offering a girl a drink”

7m12s It’s always a good set when I let everyone know I don’t pull out

8m19s Commit to the growl for an extra two seconds

8m30s Say “buy plan b in bulk” not “buy it in bulk”

9m39s Pause and smile for two seconds after “you must have some huge tubes” instead of saying thanks and ending it right away

Overall: This was an interesting set as the audience kept going back and forth from laughing to lost. I may have talked to them a little too often in the middle of a joke instead of just finishing the joke and then addressing something I notice.

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