Performance Critique: July 03a

The 8:30 show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UXCgHaVdmr0

0m18s I said “model” in a weird way

0m40s It’s never good to tell the audience the joke would be better 40 seconds in to a set

1m31s Rewatching the set, I don’t like them

2m56s Pause for a second after asking “do you know how much it costs?”

3m12s Too much stumbling over words

3m34s I made up that line on the spot, but it should be a keeper. “You look like you might know the slogan”

4m21s I need a better “moral of the story”

Overall: Not a great set but I made up a decent punch line on the spot, so it wasn’t for naught.

Verified by ExactMetrics