Performance Critique: July 02

A Thursday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ACvp2Zaiho

1m39s The laugh is all in the smile after the “when have you ever come first?” line

2m52s This is the first time I’m trying this joke on stage, and it’s getting laughs, but still needs tightening

3m31s Get rid of a bunch of words, so that it’s only “or if we wanna simplify it: Nature’s Draino”

6m16s I like this alliteration joke, but it doesn’t work, time to kill it

Overall: Decent: My new morning after pill joke needs to be tightened up but it got laughs, and my Russian immigrant material is progressing.

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