Performance Critique: January 8a

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://youtu.be/_9bJViPByao

0m33s Kiss on the mouth line doesn’t work

1m45s New part got laughs

2m45s Don’t stutter

3m33s Smile during these lines

3m42s Reword the mom line

3m49s And remember my jokes

5m14s Sound happier

7m05s Rework/tighten the Doctor Rosenfeld joke

Overall: Decent for a mic

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