The 8pm show with a crowd of about 20
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yd8sOqkvNlw
0m39s Don’t say “like” before “little girl”
1m03s Take a slight pause before saying “we’re not friends”
2m01s Smile a little more during these lines
4m23s This is the funniest line of the dog joke, rewrite this joke around this line
5m50s Try to rephrase to, “I just learned who not to kiss”
7m08s Cut the word “extra”
Overall: There were consistent (but not huge) laughs throughout, except during the dogs joke, which needs a rewrite.
