Performance Critique: January 6b

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cnsHYjmPK0w

2m48s Stopping my statement was funny cause he was a tough looking dude

3m41s This line is a keeper in the rewrite

4m21s Get rid of the whole castration topic

6m20s Pause slightly longer before “war profiteering”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6csxfTrevd8

0m49s More bass in my voice for “Tuesday”

Overall: Decent but not great.

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